A shooting star is what i'm..
So close your eyes and make a wish..
a wish before I die and dissolve in an unknown..
till the time I'm aive..
I'll fulfill what you've wished for..
A streak of light is what I'm
pass you by when you least expect it
Leaving you astonished and astound
and will disappear suddenly loosing myself
in the darkness or the black holes of the universe
To be reincarnated again to twinkle above you
in your clear blue sky....
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I made a wish! :)
This is indeed a good one. Hey, I know i wrote a real bad one on the previous one..:) that was just for humor..don't mind !
So when do I make a wish...
*eyes shut tight* done! :)
"A streak of light is what I'm
pass you by when you least expect it"
Yeah this happened with me :-) and you know why :-)
hey, stellar, din't know about those dimples..cool huh..gotchya ;)
so, i made my wish :), hell..but where are you !!
@Stellar
You are not allowed to be in hibernation!
Koi naya poem shoem ho jaye.. its been long time! :-)
A shooting star is what i'm..
So close your eyes and make a wish..
a wish before I die and dissolve in an unknown..
till the time I'm aive..
I'll fulfill what you've wished for..
A streak of light is what I'm
pass you by when you least expect it
Leaving you astonished and astound
and will disappear suddenly loosing myself
in the darkness or the black holes of the universe
To be reincarnated again to twinkle above you
in your clear blue sky....
with a hope i could
reach the beauty earth once
to live in peace !
thansk for your way to my thoughts and views. Certainly i am no way to reach your profound ideas and style of scripting the beauty through the english. will soon to read more of yours to observe your skill
hey.. you are flattering me. Already i am in such a complex that i am not able to make a good writing in my style. Your comment makees me feel how come she finds so good when i , myself not happy with my words.
hey shooting star....nice poem.
This is TOO COOL! Sorry Can't gush as much as i want to.. am a person of few words.
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