Wednesday, March 22, 2006

Beautiful loser : Life To Death

Lay there in the hope to open up my eyes again
Surrounded by my own eternity
Flowers to cover my body so gracefully
My heart isn’t beating now
Mind not replicating anything visible
How beautifully I’ve been betrayed by my own soul

3 comments:

Shashank said...

Too great! A short one but EXPLOSIVE!!!

Too good! Hats off to Pooja!

Silent Screamer said...

Nice one.. bit sad though..

A Person should not wait for the fate to change its destiny.. it could be changed by his/her own hands.. Journey of life to death is short like a shooting star.. You see it and its gone! I think likewise we have a short life (not in seconds though :P) and it has to be lived with optimism and enthu..
I hope I have comprehened your poem correctly!

AR said...

i never saw a better beautification of death like this one..