Aaj jub badalon ko dekha to mun kia
Kash umeed ki seedhi laga ke pahunch jaati
Upar us safed makhmali palang pe
Or so leti ji bhar ke ye poori zindagi
Socha kitne khushnaseeb hai yeh
Kale, safed, gehre, hulke hawa ke saath behte
Baras jaate hai kahin bhi jahan mun chhahe
Jub bhi dil bhar aata hoga inka
Chal padhte hai jidhar ki taraf bahaav ho
Bina soche apni seemaye, jo hoti nahi
Behroopiye kub udh chale kub bhinga de
Inka kuch bhi pata nahi
Kaash Jeevan se upar uth ke
Hum bhi hulke ho jaate
Dharti ke is moh se
to udh paate in badalon ke saath
5 comments:
This is very beautifully written.. You are awesome.. this shows how emotional you are.. and I know you are gr8 at expressing it through poems.. Awesome.. take care
This is very beautifully written.. You are awesome.. this shows how emotional you are.. and I know you are gr8 at expressing it through poems.. Awesome.. take care
Stellar... wonderul to see a post on ur page so soon again..
Each time i travel by air.. one looks at that wonderful world spread out.. and seriously dont know why people believe that there isnt an alternative world out there.. am absolutely certain that there is.. i can even book a house there!! :-)
Am back!!
Heres more on your poem: Its very good bcs it succeeds in creating a very vivid and compelling visual, and presents its message subtly at the end.. :-)
Its not clever with its word formations, and therefore rings more.. genuine!
And when is the next post coming?
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