When my tears dampen my own soul
I could feel the sogginess of my own thoughts
So heavy to be kept inside my little heart
But my lips don’t open the door
So that I can bid them farewell
My eyes wide open to let go off them
But my eyelids tightly shut
I try to blink them but they say
That they don’t want the dream to fall out
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Sundar ati sundar
Bahut hi uttam kavita likhi hai aapne :-)
Nice one.. :)
sometimes thoughts and dreams are better kept inside..
... And yes, when these thoughts and dreams, when kept inside for a long time, create a very beautiful innner world. Have you tried ? Beauty inside ...
Nice poem ...
Stellar: One of the things i like best about you is that you like Amrita Pritam too... havent met a lot of other ppl who do :) and the next best thing is that you write with pretty much the same excellent imagery...
m back!!!! :))
well said.. but ... the eyes lids finds hard to let it shut up to fall you out apart to raise you with sprits for another encounter.
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